Contrast Essay Between essays Just Take Away Thier Guns and I Want A Wi

"Just Take Away Their Guns" is an effective argument than "I Want a Wife." James Wilson gives a more factual, organizational and better language used argument than Judy Brady. In "I Want a Wife" Brady is stereotypical of what she believes to be the roles of the husband and wife. Also Brady's essay is one sided, she never states a side that would argue her viewpoint. While Wilson shows two clearly stated sides of his argument. The first reason as to why ?Just Take Away Their Guns? is more effective is because the essay has more specifics and facts that can?t be refutable. The president wants more gun control but the public says the laws will fail who is right? And in deciding who is right will any of our amendments be taken away or shortened? Taking away the right to be able to buy and own a gun will have hardly any effect on the illegal use of guns. Wilson states that there are 200 million guns in private ownership, about one-third of them handguns. Of the 200 million handguns that are owned, only 2 percent of the population is allowed to commit a crime. Out of the 200 million guns, about one-sixth of them, are bought legally through either a gun or pawn shop. Many of the current handguns owned, are stolen, borrowed, or obtained through private purchases that wouldn?t be affected by gun laws states Wilson. If there was a successful effort to take away or to shrink the amount of legally purchased w eapons or accessories (ammunition) then what happened to our right to bear arms? Isn?t self defense a key part in our time? If so many guns are stolen, then how is taking away the legal guns going to help? It is not, because people will always find ways to get a gun no matter the restrictions set upon it. Although Wilso... ...e of her duties is to care for the kids, and to obey the husband?s wishes of privacy and sex. While Wilson never uses any sarcasm in his essay to portray what he wants the readers to know and understand. Wilson gives logical and understandable reasons which can easily be seen with no rebuttal. In conclusion this is why I firmly believe that Wilson has a more coherent and cohesive, well stated, argument than Judy?s by no stretch of the imagination. Wilson?s thoughtful process in coming up with an essay that was factual, organizational, and had good use of language is why this argument is so well written. Judy?s essay is undeniably poorly written, to an extent to which a child may right. All in all, ?Just Take Away Their Guns? Wilson has captured the attention of the audience that is unmatched in Judy?s. So all I say is that, ?Guns do kill, people don?t?.